但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.It was sunny tomorrow,so after that,he road a bike to the park.He had a great fun playing with his friends.At noon,he had lunch with his parents inMcDonald's.It was a tasty lunch.In the afternoon,Sam played basketball with his classmates at school form then four o'clock still six o'clcok.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his dad.His dad bought a CD for him.He is very happy.What a interesting day Sam had!