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Our Monitor I am a student in a junior high school.I am in Class 16,Grade 7.After half a semester,I konw my classmate very much.Our monitor is in especial.Our monitor is an active boy.His name is Weiwei.He is 12 years old now.He is strong and tall.He is a little handsome.He always wear a blue shirt.He is hard-working and enthusiastic.He is helpful for the teacher.We all like him.