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Pen pal wanted My name is Lucy King. I am form the UK and I can speak Englsh.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I am thirteen years old this year.I want a pen pal in China,because I love China and I want to know China very well.I hope my pen pal is the Chinese girl.The girl who has the same hobbies with me is the best.If she can promise,I will study Chinese from her. Please write and tell me about yourself.