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Pen pal wanted My name is Lucy King. I am form the UK and I can speak Englsh.My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I am thirteen years old this year.I want a pen pal in China,because I love China and I want to know China very well.I hope my pen pal is a Chinese girl.The girl who has the same hobbies with me is the best.If she can promise,I will study Chinese from her. Please write and tell me about yourself.