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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2273
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;句式变化多样;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

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Whether government should invest in art or other aspects of the society? This issue has become the focus of public concerns and divided the general public over a long time. And many governments in the world have already adopted various approaches with both positive and negative outcomes. People who are against the investment of public fund in art believe that there are many more pressing problems in our society,for example public health. It is obvious that the priority should always been given to meeting people's most basic needs. Considering the fact many countries in the world still suffer from deceases resulting from lack of clean water and public health services, the government in those countries should concentrate their efforts and budgets on addressing these problems because they have much greater threat to those people and societies. For this reason, it may seems justifiable to drop artists from the list of government supporting subjects. However, people against funding artists ignore another important consideration that the government always takes into account when making decision on whether to support a project: the long term effects on the society. Admittedly, Art in itself, cannot bring in as much economic benefit as other business related projects. However, it is an indispensable aspect of our society because spiritual needs are just as important as physical needs for human beings. While failing to satisfy our physical needs can have a direct effect on our lives in a relatively short time, failing to meet our spiritual demands often results in more profound and severe deterioration on our minds and social values though an indirect approach over a long term, making it more difficult to observe. It is widely accepted across the world that government should always bear in mind the concept of sustainable growth when forming strategy, making decision and taking action. Sustainable growth, as it connotation suggests, is a long-term concept. So in order to achieve sustainable growth, the government must have a long-term perspective and ignoring art or people's spiritual demands, is by no means in consistent with the concept of sustainability. In conclusion, my opinion is that any country should not totally abandon artists and art-related projects. In those cases with extreme strains on government budget, it is just a matter of the allocation of public fund, rather than a matter of the necessity.

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