若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at 6 p.m yesterday.And he rode a bike to the park,he had a good time.In the afernoon,he played the basketball with his classmats in the school from 4 till 6 p.m.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his dad,and his dad gave him a classical CD.That's an interesting day for Sam.