单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Tom has a rule for his life,so let me show you the rule about Tom.Tom has to get up at 6:00 and get to school at 6:15,he doesn't eat outside and listen to music on school days.Tom doesn't watch TV on school night, he back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.