邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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For this year,there are some campus force whitch have made people surprised.At the same time,we all have a deep thought：what shall we do to inprove school safety?Some experts said that we should improve the security guard and student's realise of safety first.Then,we must control and forbid to fight among students.It is a good idea to reduce the campus force.Last but not lesst,it is also helpful to educate the students and make their mind healthy.