邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

For this year,there have been some campus force which have made people surprised.At the same time,we all have a deep thought：what shall we do to inprove school safety?Some experts said that we should improve the security guard and student's realise of safety first.Then,we must control and forbid to fight among students.It is a good idea to reduce the campus force.Last but not least,it is also helpful to educate the students and make their mind healthy.