七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句数量过少；文中用词稍显贫乏，有一些单词拼写错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Sam got up at six yesterday.then he rode the bike to the park,he had a good time in the park.At noon,he had lunch with his parents at the McDonald's.In the afternoon he played basketball in the school with his classmates,he piayed basketball from four till six .After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father.His father bought a classic music CD for him.What a fun day Sam had this day.