小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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What kind of lifestyle do you prefer,country life or city life.some people like to live in big city,because life there is conveneint ,compared with country,there are better education,better medical care,and more employment opportunities,but the envorment in city is becoming worse and worse,the air quality in big city is horrendous,exhaust fumes from Vehicles cause a great deal of damage to the enviroment,on top of that,there are more and more large chemical factories in big city which are contributing to the high pollution levels in the water and the air in the city,living in a polluted city like this will be bad for our health,i think I'm going to have to find a greener place to live in,in comparison to the city,country is more quiet and peaceful,even though they don't have the modern convenience offered by the city,but the sky is blue,water is clear and the air is cleaner and fresher in country,