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What kind of lifestyle do you prefer,country life or city life? Sone people like to live in the big city,because life there is convenien ,compared with the country,there are better education,better medical care,and more employment opportunities,but the enviroment in city is becoming worse and worse,the air quality in big city is horrendous,exhaust fumes from Vehicles cause a great deal of damage to the enviroment,on top of that,there are more and more large chemical factories in the city which are contributing to the high pollution levels in the water and the air,living in a polluted city like this will be bad for our health,the pollution levels are so high that I want to go outside with face mask In comparison to the city,country is more quiet and peaceful,even though they don't have the modern convenience offered by the city,but the sky is blue,water is clear and the air is cleaner and fresher
