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How to learn English well Nowday,many students think it is so difficult to study English well.There are some students lost their heart as well.So,I will tell you how to study English better. All as we known,English gets more and more important in our morden live.Whether in our daily life or some special places. Therefore,we should study it well by something helpful. There are three useful tips:First,you'd better improve the interests of English,because interset is the best teacher and which can improve your English fast.Then, you should try you best to train youself in English,such as practising speaking or listening English edition.Finally,don't worry so much,keeping a nice mood is also helpful.In a word,the best way is struggling to use it and you will make a great progress.