小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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What kind of life do you prefer,country life or city life? Some people like to live in the city,because life there is convenient ,compared with the country,there are better education,better medical care,and more employment opportunities,however the environment in the city is becoming worse and worse,the air quality in the big city is horrendous,exhaust fumes from Vehicles cause a great deal of damage to the environment,on top of that,there are more and more large chemical factories in the city which are contributing to the high pollution levels in the water and the air,living in a polluted city like this will be bad for our health and just as my last daily record said I don't feel any sense of belonging here In comparison to the city,country is more quiet and peaceful,even though they don't have the modern convenience offered by the city,but the sky is blue,water is clear and the air is cleaner and fresher