2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用。

There're more and more people in China who have a cellphone in recently, and more and more cellphone app are created to make our life easier. For example, wechat, an app that created by Tecent, is contained in almost every cellphone in China. We use it to chat with friends, share our interesting things and daily photos with those who care about us.We can only send messages in the past, and they were not so cheap, now we can send more information to other ones by wifi, it's acceptable for more people. But more and more problems appear with the increasing of cellphone.Let me take an example, we can accept many interesting informations by cellphone, so that we can often see a crowd people who are watching cellphones when they're having a meal,or having a meeting. We can also see news tell that many traffic accidents are caused by crossing the road with the eyes on the cellphone instead of look around.