七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Yesterday was Sam's happy day! He got up at 6:00.after he finished his breakfast went to park by his bicycle,at the park he met his friends they were talked about football match, they talked about themselves favourite star.Until lunch time sam and his parent's went to MsDonald's have a eat lunch McDonald's was Sam's favourite restaurant. At the afternoon ,Sam went to his school play together with his classmate,they played basketball,they were all happyied! two hours after sam went home. after dinner he and his father went for a walk,his father bought a classic CD give gift to his. What an interesting day!