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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇基础不错，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误。
Nowadays ,we are having better life than old generations.We don't need to worry about various expenditures,such as food ,clothing, education,travel and so on.But I believe that saving is still outstanding custom for Chinese. As we live in the cosmopolitan city of Shanghai,which is one of the richest city in the whole nation. Most of the top-riches ,tycoons are everywhere.Massive wealth was held in their hands.And the assets of the plain person sharply increased in propotion in recent years. But we should realize the reality that our country is a developing country. There are still thousands of compatriots are suffering the hunger and poverty,especially in the easten area of China. The poor kids in these area don't have sufficient educational and medicine resources, they are eager to have equal chance .But the regional weathy difference results in the uneuqal reality. So how could we waste our food ,how could we waste any nature resource, all of these will evoke the sense of guilty. On a personal note, I'm used to using coupons while travel and eat out, we can make a saving. I'm lavish of money . On this point, the Chinese second rich genertaion really need to curb their conspicuous consume habit.
