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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中句式变化多样，同时从句使用很棒；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
What kind of life do you prefer,city life or country life? Some people like to live in the city,because life there is convenient,compared with the country,they have better eduction,better medical care,and more empolyment opportunities. However with the development of industry,the environment in the city is becoming worse and worse,the air quality in the city is horrendous,exhaust fumes from Vehicles cause a great deal of damage to the environment,on top of that,there are more and more large chemical factories in the city which are contributing to the high pollution levels in the water and air,living in a polluted city like this will be bad for our health and just as my last diary said I don't feel any sense of belonging city In comparison to the city,the condition of the country is obviously different,It's peace and quiet,even though they don't have the moder convenience offered by the city,but it's pleasant to live with green mountains,blue sky,green trees and red sunsets,that's the reason I like to live in the country. Lastly I would like to appeal to everyone pays more attention to the environment when we are developing the industry,Meanwhile we shouldn't forget to develop the country,if so the gap between city and country will become smaller and smaller and people will enjoy both modern and peaceful lives,If everyone pitches in,the world will be a better place
