文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
Nowadays, with the informition technology developing rapidly, people tend to live a more quik life. We eat fast food, take speeded transportion, conmunicate by in time massage online. However, maybe we're way too fast that sometimes we used to come to the conclusion at the time we see or hear without considering whether it is true. Obviously, this is a common phenomenon in our lives.
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