文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇,但词汇量不大,且存在拼写错误。
Nowadays, with the information technology developing rapidly, people tend to live a more quik life. We eat fast food, take speeded transportion, communicate by in time message online. However, maybe we're way too fast that sometimes we used to come to the conclusion at the time we see or hear without considering whether it is true. Obviously, this is a common phenomenon in our lives.
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