七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

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What a busy day I had yesterday! In the morining,I got up under the sunshine and I felt comfortable.After that,I had milk and bread for breakfast,and then my friend invited me to go camping in the park.We played games both of us like and took lots of picture.We also climed the mountain and swam in the river.It was very interesting for us to cook lunch by ourselves,so we enjoyed our meals very much.We really had a good time.