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What a busy day I had yesterday! In the morning,I got up under the sunshine and I felt comfortable.After that,I had milk and bread for breakfast,and then my friend invited me to go camping in the park.We played games both of us like and took lots of pictures.We also climbed the mountains and swam in the river.It was very interesting for us to cook lunch by ourselves,so we enjoyed our meals very much.We really had a good time.