句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;文章层次较为清晰。
Someone said:"Eyes are the window of the heart."We can konw,our eyes are very important for us to protect.If we don't have them,we can't see what world colourful is,and we will feel boring every day. How to protect eyes?First,don't use computer or watch televison for a long time,and then have a look at the trees.Second,don't read books under the sun or dark light.The sunshine is blinding and it's bad for you.Last,you have to know some vegetables is also good for your eyes,like:carrots,sweet potatoes and so on. Let protect our eyes and we will see the word in the future.