七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Sarm get up at 6 o'clock yesterday,then he went to the park by bike and play very well.He and his perents ate middle in the McDonald's at noon.He and his classmates played baseketball in the afternoon from 4pm to 6pm.After dinner,Sam and his father went for awalk and his father brought a calssical CD for him.How funny a day sam have!