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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。
We see many parents that give too much love to their babies, sometimes, this love causes conseques that are not so good like we think.Some live skills, if they don't have enough practise, they can't grow up. For example, if they don't try how to cook, they maybe can't cook a common meal.Most people will go out of their home and live alone or live with other people, if they don't have enough skills, they may can't live harmously with others. In my opinion, parents can make a checklist that full of the skills which their babies must have,and make sure which ones their babies need practise more,so they can make more chances for their babies to try,they can just watch their babies practising, tell them what is right and what is wrong.Also, they can tell them how things will achieve easier and faster.
