2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

On accordition of the graph above, we can observe that various accidents' consequences and their changes compare with 2004 in a Chinese city in 2005. As the statistics shown in the graph, the most serious cause of the accidents is drivers turning left without due care, which is ten percentage higher than 2004. At the same time, accidents owing to drivers traveling too close to other vehicles are mounting as well. What's more, not only causing by drivers' fauts, accidents could happen for pedestrians' careless either. Figures informs us, there were 411 accidents caused by pesdestrians crossing roads carelessly, which requires our attention.