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My favorite sport My favorite sport is football. However, it is an accidental opportunity that made football be my favorite sport. I pick up a football on my way home, then I play football with my friends. From now on, I love the football deeply. I often practice and match with my classmates. My favorite football superstar is Beckham and my greatest wish is that becomes a professional football player.