但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My favorite sport is football. By chance, I love to play football. I pick up a football on my way home. Then I play football with my friends. From now on, I love the football deeply. I often practice and match with my classmates. My favorite football superstar is Beckham and my greatest wish is that become a professional football player.