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Dear George, I am happy to know that you will have travel to my hometown. I have consulted many household hotel for you and I have chose a household hotel that cost performance is higher than other household hotels for you. The room that live on person is 30 yuan one day and the room that live tow persons is 40 one day. The meals is 20 yuan one person, one day. If you want to have a meal with the house owner, there is a menu and you can order the food that you want to eat. Of course, you can do it by youself. During you live in the house hold hotel, you can go to the sea bath、swim and climb the mountain. If you want, you can do some labor in the greenhouse. But you will not have some payments.When you further understand china, you also can feel the family atmosphere。I am waiting for you coming. yours Ada