高一英语作文模拟题:家庭旅馆

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Dear George, I am happy to know that you will have travel to my hometown. I have asked for many household hotels for you and I have chosen a household hotel that price performance is higher than other household hotels for you. The room that living one person is 30 yuan one day and the room that living tow persons is 40 one day. The price of the meal is 20 yuan one person, one day. If you want to have a meal with the house owner, there is a menu and you can order the food that you want to eat. Of course, you can do it by youself. During you live in the house hold hotel, you can go to the sea bath、swim and climb the mountain. If you want, you can do some labor in the greenhouse. But you will not have some payments.When you further understand china, you also can feel the family atmosphere。I am waiting for you coming. yours Ada