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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。
Spring Festival Gala has hold many years in China.In the past years, we don't have much entertainment on spring festival eve. Family members sit around a desk, eat dumplings and watch TV(almost every channel broadcast Spring Festival Gala), enjoy the humony of the family, that must be the warm memory for almost everyone who is not so young. In recently, because of the fast develop of the information times, we have more choice on spring festival eve, while the style of spring festival gala doesn't change much so that many people think this gala is out of date, and a few people claim that this gala can come to an end. In my opinion, I think spring festival gala should not be canceled.Because there are still a huge number of people who don't want to do many complicated things in spring festival eve, they just want stay at home with their families. Watching spring festival gala and chating lesurely may be the best choice for them.For other people who have less interesting in the gala, there are still many channels which offer many others programs.If you don't want to face to a television during that night, it doesn't matter for you whether the gala is canceled or not. For many elder people, spring festival gala is a symbol that the families can get together and a more hopeful new year will come.
