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2006年12月英语四级作文真题:春节晚会

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:06浏览次数:1685
要求:
1、许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会;
2、但有的人认为应该取消; 
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用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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There is a very important day in my mainland-China. Yes, that is the Great Spring Festival , the end of Chinese year. Most of Chinese will go home to enjoy the festival with family or friends. And the government usually bring a tv-ceremony show which called 'CCTV Spring Festival Ceremony' to their people . May be they think their people would get laughing , happiness from the ceremony . And they did it, many people love the day and the TV-show. But there are some people who do not like the show still here. Perhaps there are serval reasons I think . The first one , the play do not shoot their interesting . China is a big country which has the most people in the world , and She has a very huge mainland . And people maybe have different interesting from different places , for example , people from the North China like The 2-person Play ,while the South Chinese love enjoying music more . Everyone on the table has his own tastes. That is why someone do not like the Spring Festival Show. The second reason , the people are from different ages , the younger loves dancing while the elder like the Chinese-Play. NO3, the TV-Show takes too long time for some people , contains longer than four hours. They cannot accept it . So I can understand why some people suggest the government to cancel the show. But I don't agree . If you don't like it ,just leave it . I think the people who love the show must be much more than who disagree. While I also the directors call bring something new feeling to us, and don't broadcast the show to every TV of the province .

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