简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;文章用词太过单一,文章拼写错误比较多。
sam got up six o'clock at yesteday moring.After that,he rode his bike to the park,He had great and funny.aftenoon,He had lunch in mcdonald's with his parents,In the afternoon,sam played basketball from four to six in school with his calssmate,At after dinner,sam go for a walk with his father,His father give he bought a calssical CD.What a happy day sam had.