作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Sam get up at six yesterday.In the park and ride a bike to go to the park, he had a good time.Chinese and parents eat lunch at McDonald's.Sam and his classmates in the school play basketball in the afternoon, from 4 PM to 6 PM.After dinner, Sam and his father walk together, his father bought him a piece of classical music.How interesting the day Sam