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Science and technology brings us more convienently lives. But it, meanwhile, do damages to nature at large. People cannot alive without a good nature systerm. Some people think that we can do nothing to improve this situation. Because the population around the world has reached the deadline which the earth could supply for. And many plants and animals species are exticting year by year. The other plants and animals must live in the bad environment which is fulled with many pollution. The damages is so worldwild that we have no money and time to repair the nature. However, other people hold the positive attitude. They think that science and technology could help us to protect the nature. with high-technology, scientists could invest the habits of the rare animals. Besides, new methods will be invited to solve the pollution problem. As far as I corncened, the nature problem will be not disturb us. But prompt measures should be taken to solve it. The government also should be ware of their duty and the public should do things they can do to protect the plants and animals.
