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熟练的采用了一些从句；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
i am very happy to hear that you are going to visit my hometown and can not wait to expressing my welcome .there are many beautiful places in my hometown,but i think the wanlv lake is the most intetrsting place that i will take you to see. wanlu lake is a place where with a variety of trees around ,i kown you major in forestry ,which in my view you will most interesting in there trees,and the water so clean that we can drink it directly.if the weather is good,we can have a picnic with some friends.while eating food and enjoying the beautiful sight,how sublime joy is.besides ,we can go boating and fishing there. wanlv lake ,is a world with vigor and vitality,is a window which can learn many knowledge about forestry.
