2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

smartphone addicts nowadays,mobile phone become more and more common in our daily life .it reported that a brief account of increasing use of the mobile phone.as the picture show us that person who is passing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see,like a brief. in my perspective,cell phone can get access of information quickly,and it can save our time to go shopping ,which we can buy various on line.but if we most stronger rely on our cell phone and look at cell phone everytime which we will miss most wonderful things.it is very easy for us to accident because of over use our cell phone . everything has two sides,the cell is .it is not use necessary ,but everytime look at it .if we always use it we lose our thinking ability.