正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
Sam gots up at six o'clock yesterday.Then he went to park rode a bike.He at the park had a good time.His parents and he had lunch at McDonald’s.At the afternoon,Sam and his classmates played basketball at school.After dinner,Sam and his father went for a walk.His father bought a CD for Sam. How Sam had a good day!