2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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With the improvement of economic, advertisement has been seen everywhere from newspapers to internet. It is the result of the compitition of economic and people seems to adapt to advertisement. Many people benefit from the advertisement. They always have no time to pick up what they want to buy, so following the advertisement becomes the best convienint way. Advertisement meanwhile provide them cheaper goods which makes people depend on it. However, advertisement has many negative effects. To begin with, advertisement tends to make people to buy things which they do not need at the time. People do not realises that they have waste so much money. Besides, advertisement always threat the costumer though the pretty face which lead to competitives of the companies. Lastly, the worst thing is that advertisement makes people think about rather things and goods in the ads than what they want to do. Advertisement has been existed, so what we can do is that we should learn to use it rather than to follow it.