七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多。

yesday,sam get up at six o'ciock . after he went to park by bike .he was very happy .and in the park he was flying a kite wite his good firend.then he went to mcdonaid's wite his parent,in the afternoon ,sam played backetball wite his good friends at school .he didn't go home until at six pm. after he had dinner ,he went for a walk wite his father .his father bought a CD for he,he was very happy,What a happy day it is.