文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. Her name is Amy. She is 12 years old. She is a lively girl. Her favorite subject is English. She is good at playing the piano and play it very well. She likes reading books and read a newspaper, so she often goes to the bookstore to read and buy lots of books. She is my best friend, we are in the same school, the same class. I like her very much.