七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文章词汇表达不够丰富，也请检查文章的单词拼写；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam woke up at six o' colck yesterday.He had a good time,then took a bike to the park. He had the lunch with his parents at McDonald's.Sam and his classmate played the basketball in the school,from four o'colck p.m till six o'colck p.m. After had the dinner,Sam and his father went for a walk,his father bought a calssic music CD for hi.How interesting day Sam he had !