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My dear friend , I am so glad that you are going to visit my hometown . Welcome to China , Frank. As you know, China is much bigger than your motherland , and it truly has very many famous places , for example, the Great Wall, the Yellow River, the himalaya mountain and so on. While today i just want to introduce you the most interesting place which named HuangShan in my hometown. It is a great mountain , and in my opinion it's the most beautiful place in China. There are over million people come there to have a good travel . People look at the great mountain , the green tree, and also enjoy the beautiful clean air. Climming is so good to both body and mind that some one will come their several times a year. Why don't we go next time?
