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但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Yesterday Sam got up on six o’clock and went to a park by bike. He had a very good time in the park. He and his parents had lunch at McDonald's. In the afternoon Sam and his classmates played basketball from four o’clock till six o’clock. After super Sam went for a walk with his father. And his father bought a classical CD for him. Sam had lots of fun in this day.
