作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear George, I am happy to receive your letter,and I am glad to give my answers about the question of the household hotel of my hometown.The price of household hotel is very reasonable in my hometown.You only need to pay for 30 Yuan a day for a single room, the double room is 20 Yuan a day each person,and the meal fee is 20 Yuan a day each person too. You can have your lunch with the family,a menu will be offered,you can order what you like,and you can cook for yourself . Not only you can bathe or swim in the sea but also can climb or do work in greenhouse without paying.You will make a close understanding about China and feel the family atmosphere through these. Hoping all of above is useful to you. With best regards, Jenny