小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

Lucia is my best friend,She's chinese name is He YuYing.She 's from GuangDong.She's my colleague,I think she's a very nice person,I like all time with her.We're ususally go shopp and travel together.We're has studied english since July .She have a little sister and a little brother,her' s sister is a nice person,too.