2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

the mid-autumn festival is one of Chinese traditional festival. in this festival, our family are reunite together. they are enjoy the full moon and eat the moon cake together. some people would like to travel with the family, and some would visit the family and friend in this special day that they can chat with some friend in some new about themselves.