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Dear Lucy, I am so glad to received your letter and I am so excited that you are going to visit my living city-Shenzhen. Shenzhen is my second hometown.I have been living here for twelve years.It is a very modern city,likewise,it is so convenient.Now I'd like to introduce you some interesting places of Shenzhen,of course,they are also places which I would like to take you to see. Window of the World,almost tourists come to Shenzhen like to visit it.Because you can see the world through it.It is an epitome of the world.I am sure you will love it. The Folk Village.It is as a place as Window of the World,but they are something different.Window of the World is about "the world",the Folk Village is about "China".The Folk Village contains all of famous places in china.You will feel like that you visit all of china after visiting it.You also know china well through it. Dong Bu Hua xiao Cheng,this is a very interesting place,there are so much things to see and play. Above three places I would like to take you to see,of course,there are also some interesting places which I don't introduce you.I'd like to talk to you about all of interesting places in the city when you come here. I look forward to your coming. Best wishes, Jenny
