英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12897
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Now it is an era of electronic communication,it brings great convinience to people.I think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Firstly,nowabays,works keep people busy.We have no much time to meet our family and friends.Electronic communication is a perfect way to contact them.Even if we can not meet each other regularly,but we can stay in touch by this way. Secondly,above the picture tells us that electronic communication is a good way between parents and children.For example,sometimes parent has a quarrel with their child.Both of them feel embarrassed to talk each other,electronic communication is very helpful at the moment. The last but not least,electronic communication can eliminate misunderstanding.Sometimes it's hard to say something in face-to-face contact,or somtimes someone dislikes to hear us because of his indignation,but electronic communication will help you doing these. To sum up.I think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.

会员评论0个评论)
天使Jenica
金币:12

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:92.0TCL唐亮

人气:310发布:2014-06-12

得分:91.0714276417

人气:84发布:2014-06-19

得分:87.0sv小洁

人气:62发布:2014-07-03

得分:87.0黑暗圣堂123

人气:43发布:2015-08-04

得分:86.0萌黑阿菲

人气:54发布:2016-01-21