七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉。

Sam get up six o'clock yesteday. Then he go to the park by bycle and had a good time in there. Afternoon, he had a lunch  with his parent in McDonald's. Next，Sam play basketball with his schoolmates in the school's playground，and they do this begin four o'clock pm till six o'clock pm. After the dinner, Sam and his father go for a walk together, and his father buy him a classic CD. what a colorful day sam had been.